FMP

Thoughts???
Basically thought of a way to write my story/myth, and this is what I have at the moment.
BTW the person has no name at the moment
So im naming her lola for now :0
Lola had a terrible life full of pain and misery and one day she just decided to forget it all. She decided it was best to erase her life that was given to her by the Gods and act none of it happened and like this was her first memory.
She ended up erasing it all from her mind but it never truly left her as everything you to deny and hide will always be a part of you, just like your shadow.
She denied who she was, she denied her life, and she defied the Gods.
The Gods took wrath on her by giving life to her shadow, and all of the pain and misery of her life, werent gone anymore. The shadow tried to consume her, and her body filled with the memories and hatred of her life, and she had now ill to supress it.
So the negativity grew until she came across two feathers on the floor one white and one black. She chose to pick up the white feather in the move that changed everything. A white feather is a symbol of hope and light, a symbol of rebirth in a way.
This urged her to fight the darkness within her, and she soared to new heights of hope within herself that she didnt know she had.
The conflict within herslef ended with her shadow returning to normal adn the Gods satified that she accepted you cant deny the past because it made the present.
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